Ringing Sussex

Today we walked from Ring to Ring
beneath a winter sky
The sun shone bright despite the threat
of rainfall by and by

Plans long laid, fruition saw
a walk unlike no other
With smile and gusto two men went
friends yes, but also brothers

Cissbury came and Cissbury went
rain followed sun with thunder
But in between the blue skies came
and Chanctonbury wonder

Thirteen miles of Sussex hill
more on the morrow too
The weather promising much less rain
and maybe sunshine too.

©Jemverse

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4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Sylvie G
    Nov 17, 2014 @ 13:25:30

    Nice ending to the poem.
    Sylvie G.
    Visual poetry

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  2. Jem Croucher
    Nov 17, 2014 @ 14:30:37

    Thank you Sylvie 🙂

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  3. Maureen rapley
    Nov 17, 2014 @ 16:36:11

    Lovely walk lovely words.x

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  4. Jem Croucher
    Nov 17, 2014 @ 17:53:38

    🙂

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