As autumn takes hold
Summer fades to memory
with a tinge of sadness there

Yet with the autumn
the golden treasure returns
And we are richer for that


This is a Sedoka poem – an unrhymed verse comprising of two three-lined katauta with a 5/7/7 syllabic sequencing. (The two verses talk of differing views of the same thing).

8 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Mr. Militant Negro
    Oct 11, 2015 @ 08:58:39

    Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.

    Liked by 1 person


  2. Jem Croucher
    Oct 11, 2015 @ 09:01:19

    😀 😀



  3. Gwenice Gwee
    Oct 11, 2015 @ 12:19:52

    I learned a new form of poetry today! I’ll try it out one day. 😀

    Liked by 1 person


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