As autumn takes hold
Summer fades to memory
with a tinge of sadness there
Yet with the autumn
the golden treasure returns
And we are richer for that
©Jemverse
This is a Sedoka poem – an unrhymed verse comprising of two three-lined katauta with a 5/7/7 syllabic sequencing. (The two verses talk of differing views of the same thing).
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Oct 11, 2015 @ 08:58:39
Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Oct 11, 2015 @ 09:01:19
😀 😀
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Oct 11, 2015 @ 12:19:52
I learned a new form of poetry today! I’ll try it out one day. 😀
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Oct 11, 2015 @ 12:44:58
The https://poetscornerblog.wordpress.com is good for things like that. Quite a few poetry challenges throughout the year.
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Oct 11, 2015 @ 12:49:22
Oh, I do see other Sedoka poems on that blog! Thanks for telling me.
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Oct 11, 2015 @ 15:06:47
😀
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