These Words

These words on a page
in my little book
I’ll return to again
for another good look
As I’ll craft them and
often I’ll rearrange
for the syntax to work
from a nuance or change
And then when I’m happy
with what my words say
I’ll give them a name
and call it a day


Photo – my current poetry ideas book, hand-crafted and purchased in Venice, Italy – Jempics

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Kendall F. Person
    Oct 28, 2018 @ 08:30:57

    I enjoyed the smile These Words gave me, nearly as much as I did those words. Bravo.

    Liked by 1 person


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  3. JanBeek
    Oct 29, 2018 @ 02:24:20

    Yes, always a good idea to set it aside, have another look later, and after viewing afresh, make the improvements your tired eyes missed the day before.

    Liked by 1 person


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