These words on a page
in my little book
I’ll return to again
for another good look
As I’ll craft them and
often I’ll rearrange
for the syntax to work
from a nuance or change
And then when I’m happy
with what my words say
I’ll give them a name
and call it a day
©Jemverse
Photo – my current poetry ideas book, hand-crafted and purchased in Venice, Italy – Jempics
Oct 28, 2018 @ 08:30:57
I enjoyed the smile These Words gave me, nearly as much as I did those words. Bravo.
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Oct 28, 2018 @ 08:37:46
Thanks Kendall 😀
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Oct 28, 2018 @ 18:42:22
😀
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Oct 29, 2018 @ 02:24:20
Yes, always a good idea to set it aside, have another look later, and after viewing afresh, make the improvements your tired eyes missed the day before.
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Oct 29, 2018 @ 06:59:34
🙂
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