A Sussex view (revisited)

6 of 10 in the Jemverse ‘Sussex’ series

Sun sets on a winter sea
Golden ‘cross wet sand
as we go walking at low tide
as lovers, hand in hand

Obi’s here of course with us
trotting at our feet
His paws wet in the water
and enjoying this fine treat

And though there’s chill upon the air
there’s warmth within the sun
as it sinks beneath the Western sea
now the daytime is all done

By and by we’ll head back home
but for now a lingering stare
across the golden water
as the light, it fades out there

For this is Sussex by the sea
and these view they are our own
Never ceasing to bring wonder
Here in Shoreham, we call home

©Jemverse

Photo – Jempics

Jemverse originally posted ‘A Sussex View’ on 2 February 2019

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5 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. JanBeek
    Jul 13, 2019 @ 12:34:30

    Beautifully written to compliment the lovely scene!

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

  2. Trackback: A Sussex view (revisited)~by Jeremy J Croucher | OUR POETRY CORNER
  3. utahan15
    Jul 13, 2019 @ 17:01:53

    red sails
    set
    and even
    tho
    it is not yet
    the tide
    is neap

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

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